This version flows a lot better than before, I like it!

One thing that still feels odd is how short the scene of Padme and Nute is before the droids are disabled. Obviously you can’t include more from after that point, so the only other way I can see it working is to cut right from the surrender of the queen to the scene with Nute.

Love the idea of Anakin saying ‘we’ve gotta do something’ while in space, it really sells that he’s there for a purpose. It has always bugged me, however, to have his ship get hit in what appears a superficial manner, then to have him freak out and spin the ship into the hangar. What if he gets shot earlier in the battle and then R2 advises turning back, only for Anakin to refuse. At that point he knows the stakes. Then he could be further chased by ships and do the spin maneuver, even keeping the line, which goes out of his control a bit and lands him in the hangar.

JEDIT: Crazy idea, but what if we could use an idea from BOBF with Mando’s supercharge button on the Naboo fighter? Perhaps this is something that a few of the fighters have pre-installed in this era, and Anakin accidentally/purposefully uses it to boost through the shield into the hangar? That would explain why he’s having a hard time stopping the ship, why it’s overheated, and also how he could get through the shield while the other ships apparently never thought of that. Maybe if we pulled a shot of him pressing some important button from earlier or later, coupled with a boost sound effect and a bit of added engine flare.