I’d get rid of the “rey” right before kylo says “tell me where you are” as him saying rey starts to get repetitive. I’d also go with just “it’s anger that fuels you” and cut the rest of that line.
Post #1475295
- Author
- leftshoe18
- Parent topic
- REY NOBODY - A Collaborative Thread
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1475295/action/topic#1475295
- Date created
- 9-Mar-2022, 9:12 PM