Wow, interesting idea there. To be honest, the first time watching I assumed that Zam’s scope was actually Jar Jar’s POV for some reason (idk, maybe this new green Gungan has a bionic eye lol). I think it’s because the “Welcome, Jedi” line comes immediately before the assassination attempt, so my brain sort of connected the two. Giving that part a little more breathing room might help it sell better; maybe extend the shot of Padmé and Typho if possible.

I think seeing Zam might help too, but I understand that’s a hard thing to get working and may cause a different set of issues.

Thanks for sharing your work 👍