Thanks for sharing this Spence! I do think the new lines could use some work, but the lines really fit with the idea of what we’re trying to do, though. I also like how you skipped over Rey’s line, “Stop talking!” Honestly, Rey doesn’t really say anything of substance in this whole scene. The only information she provides is that she doesn’t like what Kylo is saying. But I think it works better when we just get that info from her non-verbal acting.

Hmm, this is definitely turning the gears. Honestly this makes me want to redo the sound from the ground up, and have no music at all.