It feels a little rushed in my opinion, but I REALLY like how you had Rey quickly turn around and slash at Kylo. I kind of don’t like how Rey’s dialogue in this scene mostly consists of her saying “No” in different ways. So, I like how that little change makes Rey look smarter and less patient with Kylo’s shit. It also adds to the whole theme of her tapping into her dark side.

You should definitely stick with what you have if you’re happy with it. I do think it would be nice to see the scene trimmed, but not totally speeding through the scene.