I actually think connecting the plotlines like this would make it feel simpler, not more complicated. Human brains are good at retaining information when it relates to other information; we’re less good at remembering multiple pieces of unrelated information (thus the existence of mnemonics, for instance). Having a moment where the audience goes “ah, that’s why I was being shown four different things” will - in my opinion - make those four endings feel less scattered and narratively chaotic.
Post #1474930
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- CaptainFaraday
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- Community Focus Thread 1: The Phantom Menace
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- Date created
- 7-Mar-2022, 8:03 AM