You left the bombastic music in! I was saying you could just go straight from A New Home to a quieter end credits theme, sorta like I did here but without Binary Sunset. But whatever, it’s not my call to make how you make your edits.
Personally, I don’t think you can end the last movie in a 50 year saga without it’s iconic music. Plus, I played around with some options and couldn’t find one I really like.
For my edit, I’m going to keep the ghosts, but it was an interesting experiment!