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Post #1474021

Author
cranyx
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
26-Feb-2022, 6:16 PM

Thoughts on the Future of the Force:

You spelled “artifact” the British way (artefact) in the opening text, which is something I don’t think Star Wars ever does; it’s lightsaber not lightsabre. Based on the times you post I’m assuming you’re European and that’s why you did this.

I see what you’re trying to do with the Ahsoka/younglings scene at the end, but I’m not sure if it works. Despite the McGuffin for the episode being younglings, Ahsoka’s relationship with teaching and/or lightsabers was never a theme that was touched upon. The connection feels… tenuous, especially for what is now a season closer scene.