Haven’t checked out the clip yet but I think part of the reason for the Falcon shot is because a lot of people came out of the theater thinking that she was going to live on Tatooine. The shot of her standing in front of the suns is also reused from another part of the movie: https://twitter.com/im_organa/status/1211461346040172545?s=20&t=W-zNqxWK_FA03QtKZYYenQ
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I think in the context of how you edited it, it does work better without the Falcon shot.