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Post #1473804

Author
cranyx
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
24-Feb-2022, 9:57 PM

Assassin

I would consider re-adding at least parts of the scene where Ventress is planting the bombs so that it’s clearer what happened when she triggers them. I assume that it was cut because of the silliness with the droid, but I think it can be added with that aspect of it reduced substantially if not entirely avoided.

I see what you’re doing by dubbing the “It’s so hard to know who to trust these days, isn’t it?” from Hidden Enemy at 15:33, but I think it’s a too noticeable. The calm, collected tone also conflicts with her shout of rage just a second later.