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Post #1473651

Author
cranyx
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The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
23-Feb-2022, 10:14 PM

Thoughts on The New Padawan:

I’m surprised at how well the new intro works. It drops you right into it with little setup, but it actually reminds me a bit of how episodes V and VI begin

The cut at 3:19 coupled with the newly dubbed audio feels awkward

It’s odd that Ventress explicitly addresses Anakin, but Obi-Wan responds

There’s a very weird sound effect that plays at 4:32 for just a split second

It’s unclear how we got from where the ventress fight left off to where we pick it back up again at 4:36.

It feels noticeable that there are chunks of Ventress’ dialog missing. I know you were trying to cut out references to the betrayal plotline, but I don’t know if this half measure works.

The tonal shift at 5:55 is jarring. We go from ominous threat after a narrow escape to a cheerful walk down the walkway. An establishing shot to ease us into the new scene might help

Without the first part of the sentence, Obi-Wan’s delivery of his line at 18:41 is weird. I would actually end the episode at 18:40 as Ahsoka and Anakin’s ship takes off

It almost feels like Ahsoka is interrupting Yoda at 18:08