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Post #1471931

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sirlegion13
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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Date created
11-Feb-2022, 8:56 PM

Hey man! I finally got the chance to sit down and watch up until the end of your season 1. Overall, this is a million times better at getting TCW off the ground than the original. I practically never felt like any of it was “filler”.

I only gave two (and a half) critiques really. In S01E10, there is a name drop of the Twilight as being one of the only available ships. With getting the ship being cut from the movie, I thought hearing the name hear unmasks some that the season is an edit.

Oddly specific, but in the Malevolence episode, there is a scene cut to Grievous in hyperspace asking his pilot for an update. I thought the cut away after his growl to feel too abrupt. Overall, I often felt the final fade to credits to often feel sudden. Not the transition itself being too quick, but almost as if the conversation wasn’t finished yet.

Also also, I have a somewhat random suggestion. For my own convenience, I spliced together from Ep00 to Ep10 (even added Lightsaber Lost) and took out the studio into and credits (kinda how NumeralJoker did his Mando edits). Since you had made the overall season it’s own theme, I wanted to try to take it in all together. It came out at like a 6 hour cut for the 12 episodes. I actually really recommend you give it a chance in this format 😄 I thought it shows how well you’re episodes flow into each other.