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Post #1471196

Author
Hal 9000
Parent topic
Community Focus Thread 1: The Phantom Menace
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Date created
7-Feb-2022, 6:43 PM

I’d add more blood, trailing as he falls. And getting on the floor, maybe dripping down the pit while Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon talk. Lightsabers might be able to cauterize a hand being cut off, but not someone being totally bisected like that. Maybe some organs come out.