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Post #1470960

Author
EddieDean
Parent topic
Community Focus Thread 1: The Phantom Menace
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Date created
6-Feb-2022, 5:19 PM

Just spitballing the Jar Jar/Jedi introduction, you might be able to do something like this:

[Jar Jar is saved by Qui-Gon, and gets up]
JJ: Whassa dat?
JJ: [noticing Qui-Gon walking away] Hey wait! Thatsa Jedi robe.
[Jar Jar walks after Qui-Gon, cut to them walking in the forest]
JJ: Mesa Representative Binks.
QG: You almost got us killed, are you brainless?
JJ: Mesa a deep thinker.
QG: The ability to [think] does not make you intelligent, [get us] out of here.
JJ: Uh, mesa no big with the force, but yousa let mesa handle dis.
QG: That won’t be necessary.
JJ: The Queen is me pallo. Mesa knowin her a longo time.
[A droid pursues Obi-Wan and is dispatched by Qui-Gon]
QG: You saved my again!
OW: What’s this?
QG: A local, now let’s get out of here before more droids show up.