- I like that new structure! I wonder if there’s a way of keeping more of the original scenes, though - maybe the Jedi are going to the Droid Control Ship first to either end the invasion diplomatically, or they think the Queen is being held there, depending on dialogue options. It could even be a deliberate trap for them to go there first, since Sidious would know the Senate has dispatched Jedi to go there and rescue the Queen.
Maybe Gunray could tell the Jedi that they have the Queen on board to lure them into a trap?
This would make him more active and less dependent on Sidious.That’s a good idea. Is there Gunray dialogue we could repurpose?
I’d suggest cutting the little exchange between Qui-gon and the pilot and redubbing her to say something explaining that they’re ambassadors sent to escort Amidala to coruscant. Then we could alter Gunray’s response to “Yes of course. The Queen and I would be happy to receive the ambassadors.”