They all sound great to me except for “What if he doesn’t survive?/He’s worth a fortune to me.” which still has quite a jarring change in tone between the two sentences.
Post #1470576
- Author
- sade1212
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- The ‘Custom Special Edition’ That Almost Wasn’t, But Then Was (Released)
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- Date created
- 4-Feb-2022, 5:24 AM