Cut out two more Palpatine lines. “You will be empress. We will be one.” The word “empress” got repetitive in my edit, so I cut it out.
The other line is “Look what you have made!” after he’s restored to full strength. Looking back, that line doesn’t make any sense. Neither Rey nor Kylo consented to getting their life force sucked out of them, so if anything, Palpatine telling them they made this is dumb (either that, or he’s just being an abusive psychopath. Either way, it doesn’t make much sense to keep it in, especially since it sounds like something out of a Saturday morning cartoon).