Just removed a few minor things from the first 20 minutes. The last two lines during Kylo Ren’s first meeting with Palpatine, “She is not who you think she is.” and “Who is she?” have been taken out in continuity with my Episode VIII edit. The way I edited the Kylo/Rey dynamic in the previous film implies that Kylo already knew who Rey’s family was, so he doesn’t need ol’ Palpy to confirm this. This means that the final line in the opening Palpatine scene is now “End the jedi, and become what your grandfather, Vader, could not.”, placing a lot more emphasis on Kylo’s motivation by the end of the scene.

I’ve taken out Rey’s parroting of Leia’s line, “Nothing’s impossible…” So now, the conversation begins with Leia saying, “Nothing’s impossible.”, followed by Rey adding on, “But around the training course.” Same point, but with less repetition.

I also decided to remove Rey’s “Never underestimate a droid.” line during the Pasaana chase, along with Rey’s “Not now, BB-8!” So now, the whole “never underestimate a droid” bit is out of my edit. I still have BB-8 being useful during the chase, though.