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Post #1467149

Author
Artan42
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
15-Jan-2022, 3:41 PM

I was confused. I loaded it this morning to look at after work and find it’s different on the tracker. I eventually worked out why with my keen intellect.

I think the two main episodes work well together. Sending the Jedi after Grievous is a very Ventress thing to do and I found it strange she in the actual show she has one assassination strike against Dooku then gives up.

The edits to LoG work well and don’t feel jumpy and the cut to Mas is a bit quick but there’s no way around that.

Did you do any changes to the music? The scene of the Nightsisters commandeering the AAT sounds very like the Knights of Ren theme.

Retribution would be a good name as it ties up the loose ends and opens some new ones in terms of the Savage/Ventress/Grievous/Dooku (and by ecxtention Palps/Talzin) relationships.

I noticed no technical issues (missfades, audio issues etc.) but then again I’m not usually good at picking that up.

I will say the composition of the edit is very well thought out and things like the juxtaposition of both Grievous and Ventress getting rebuilt is interesting and something that works as if it was scripted.