Just made a few more tiny changes to the opening space battle. I’ve cut out the last remnants of Poe waiting for the X-Wing to charge up so he can take on the dreadnought. It wasn’t needed that much, and I don’t think anyone will miss it that badly.

I’ve also taken out the lines, “He’ll never penetrate our armor.” and “He’s not trying to penetrate our armor. He’s clearing out our surface cannons.” These two lines are a little too exposition-heavy, and our focus needs to be more on Poe at the moment.

I’ve also trimmed the shot of all the bombs dropping out of Paige’s ship by a few seconds so that it doesn’t drag too long.