In fact, I could really do with some feedback on how well that new narrative works right now, so-

WORKPRINT RELEASED - s02e02 - MASSACRE

The link’s in the usual place (replacing the older version 1 of Massacre). Detail on my new idea in the post above.

Ignore the intro and outro, they’re still the old version. (Assume that the introduction tells you that the Nightsisters have leaked the location of Grievous’ Lair, a secret that only Ventress could have known.) But I’m curious to gather feedback on the story ideas presented herein and their execution. Ordering, audio, and transitions are all done, so it plays nicely.

Thanks in advance to anyone who can spare the time!