So, what I have left to do:

Re-record Abednego line about Holdo. I’m considering subtitling it instead with the alien speech audio; I’m struggling to fit any variation on the information that I’m trying to convey into the mouth movements.
A few bits of tweaking on Rose’s new line. I’m fine with it for a V1 release as it currently is, but I’d swap it out for a V2 release if something better comes up.
VFX insert of DJ with the plomme bloom. I’m actually considering recording footage of some similar fabric with a plomme bloom pinned to it for this, but that would require making the prop myself. Which would be great fun, but, I probably will not have the time.

I want to get a V1 of this edit out soon, so I can tick it off as nominally finished. I’m proud of my work on it (and of the work of everyone who’s helped and made suggestions or observations!) and, watching it back today, the movie is finally the film I always wanted it to be.