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Post #146573

Author
twister111
Parent topic
Episode II: Shroud of the Dark Side (the TM edit) (Released)
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Date created
8-Oct-2005, 8:01 PM
Originally posted by: MTHaslett
Curses!

The only copy of Episode II that I have is MagFan's edit. I've rented the release version and sent it back, so I don't have access to the release version except through on-line scripts which are, as you see, inaccurate.

What is there in the current scene? Or can you direct me to a continuity draft ?

What's there in the current scene is:

Padme
we used to come here for school retreat. We used to swim
to that island every day. I love the water.

...We used to lie on the sand and
let the sun dry us... and try to
guess the names of the birds
singing.

Anakin
I don't like sand. It's course rough and, irratating and, it gets everywhere. Not like here, here everythings soft and, smooth.

They glance and kiss.

Padme pulls away.

Padme
No, I shouldn't have done that.

Anakin
I'm sorry.


Trooperman:
I've read the discussion on trying to explian the force ghosts. I'm not sure how your going to do some of the things that you've said. All I can say is that I hope you pull it off well(partically the Qui-gon dissappearing thing). Personally, I would just leave the force ghost thing as, it is(with just another Qui-gon VO in the dream sequence).