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Post #1465325

Author
vranir
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
4-Jan-2022, 12:37 AM

I’m finally getting back into these.

Not much to critique at all for “Assassin” except for one crazy idea - What if this were 1x01? A few dialogue trims and a new intro text could set this up as some sort of thing where this youngling Ahsoka is being sent to rendezvous with her new master on the front.

The appearance of Gunray, Dooku, and Sideous would link viewers back to Star Wars I, setting this up as a new chapter in that universe. The introduction of Ashoka would also clearly establish our new focus character, who would then become part of the more familiar team in the next episode.

We’d get a proper intro for Ventress, and maybe even the implication that the interrogation (brief as it was) provided the initial knowledge of Grievous and his weapon.

At the end, perhaps Ashoka could be delivered to Yoda, who then would send her to ObiWan and Anakin.

Like I said, it’s kind of a crazy idea, and it may not be worth the effort, especially as you’ve moved on again to the end of season 1. I just thought it might be interesting enough to mention.