The theatrical feels like a joke because of context. The music builds up then goes silent, with a silly “whoosh” sound effect, then Rey boggles at it like she’s Ernest. Hal’s edit shows that just by having the music continue unbroken with a subtle and organic sound effect, it works fine - and just goes to show what a damn fine actor Mark Hamill is, in my opinion.
That said, I’m still very interested in the new clip, if for no other reason than it’s something new to mess with in TLJ, which I thought had been exhausted after four years.