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Post #1464634

Author
Mrebo
Parent topic
Episode I: The Eyepainter Fanedit * v3 1080p and 720p now online * (Commentary a WIP)
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30-Dec-2021, 9:38 PM

This was a fun watch. I liked the crawl. Some things that I would have thought would feel too abrupt if cut actually worked well on screen. The jump to the Gungan City played decently as an added humorous moment. Maybe a musical element would emphasize that. Removing visuals of the podrace announcers works great. By removing a lot of the preamble to the race, the scene with Shmi telling Anakin to be safe was able to project more heart. Removing the Padme decoy ploy was a more surprising cut but narratively works. All in all it flowed well and it was coherent.