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Post #1464552

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DominicCobb
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REY NOBODY - A Collaborative Thread
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Date created
30-Dec-2021, 1:46 PM

I like trying to find some way to include that exchange. That’s where something like “you have no one here” comes in, although when I tried it I wasn’t crazy about it. Maybe if there’s a line to follow up “but the only family you have here” with something like “will soon be dead.” I worry that the cut off and door opening might not work, although I’d be curious to see it in action.