Editing looks good to me. Didn’t notice anything feeling off besides the quality on the Luke out takes, though I don’t think there’s much you can do about that. I probably wouldn’t include the extra early shot of the Falcon shooting, as I think the scene has a bigger impact just seeing Vader get shot out of nowhere.

Interesting how just a couple extra seconds of footage makes Luke’s character at the end a lot more confident/cocky than the theatrical version. I kind of dig it as it bridges well with his character in ESB and ROTJ.