@ Cato - I applaud your continued efforts at getting your hard work out there. Here's a couple of things I noticed that hopefully will help you to continually improve your skills:

1) Like Rixter said, try adjusting your monitor so that the black levels are even. Some of the cut & paste things show through and
really stand out.
2) The fonts and colours are a little bit off. Try looking at others and see what they've done.
3) You've used the widescreen logo from the Definitive Edition, but the back credits state it is a Fullscreen version - that's just one
of those "proofreading" things.
4) The back pictures aren't all that dynamic, and the cropping on the second one cuts people's heads off.

Good effort, keep it up and I'm sure we'll see great things from you.

Cheers.