When I watched fall of the republic NCC/SOM V2.1 I like how you made the siege of Mandalore/a battle of coruscant intercut with each other besides on how things are in such things. For me I was convinced based on Maul get up in season 7 when it was a true final.

improvement to be noted of
when doing the new version 2.2 I suggest to pan down on stars after crawl text
fix transition of Ashoka and Rex that have escaped the tribunal

Something you can try out if you have time:
You can add some flash back on
Battle of coruscant bad batch
Grievous arriving on Utapau

Overall this is great to see.