When I watched the cut you edited for Star Wars Episode 3: Revenge of the Sith/Siege of Mandalore I liked how the stories overlap with each other when it came to different events and I liked how you explained how you got through the process.
Some things you may improve on is
- Don’t cut the SOM story to far as it doesn’t make sense in this view
- Use transition from kashyyk to briefing on the mystery of darth sidious
- Ashoka/Maul should be put in flashbacks like chosen lines you must choose
Don’t listen to him anakin, and so forth don’t want to spoil it. Echo’s through voice
when Ashoka says ‘Anakin’.
-transition from Ashoka and Rex farewelling the lost clones that died on the tribunal to Yoda communing with Qui-Gon Jinn - transition Ashoka and Rex escaping the tribunal to yoda and Obi-wan going to the Jedi temple.