First thanks for sharing your work. I looked up the Dooku mentions, i like what you have done.
A quick feedback, i think in Canon, the unifying force has been renamed cosmic force. It is something else you could change in the future. ( only 3 references in this book)
I did not know that. Thanks for the feedback. There are some other things that I forgot to take out, but they’re minor. I’ll probably update them in a future update. These include a few references to Bando Gora that don’t really fit, as well as a reference to Qui Gon’s former apprentice.