I think that works really well, very clever merge! The only thing that feels off to me is the transition to Anakin, mainly because we hear his voice clearly while he’s a hologram, it should have some distortion at the beggining of the line before cutting to him on his ship, I think.

Other than that it’s great, hopefully it will help make this feel like one congruent story, can’t wait to see how it all comes together. I just checked out your previous version with Supply Lines before you take it down, and the scenes with Master Di there did feel a bit removed from the rest of the action. Seems like Liberty on Ryloth will make for a much better pairing.