Currently on chapter 36. So far the additional editing is very seamless. I have some notes on what I feel can be approved on.
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I’ve noticed that Maul is still considered to be dead. Unsure if this was intentional or forgotten to be changed in the edit.
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I think it would be helpful to have a chapter heading between the chapters before and after the events of the ‘Battle of Nelvaan’ for the reader to know when to stop and continue.