I watched your edit as I can see that I found most of the edits interesting based on how it can create a great sense of impact which you done well in most of them
Something to improve on is
- when it came to 44:01 to where it ends to the grand inquisitor to agent kallus it seems that there has been a bit of a black screen. You can fix the transition by matching the clips to its sequence.
Thanks! As mentioned in the OP, the only change I personally made was removing the epilogue, but I’ll see what I can do about cleaning up some other areas like the one you brought up.