Already made the following changes based on feedback:

-Palpatine no longer explicitly instructs Anakin to kill Dooku. He merely implies it. Slowed down a shot of Palpatine so that he still exchanges a knowing glance with Dooku before the decapitation.
-Anakin shoots down Palpatine’s advice to leave Obi-Wan behind the first time, rather than having to be pushed twice.
-Mace no longer expresses distrust of Anakin when conversing with Obi-Wan and Yoda on the LAAT
-Trimmed a few shots where Yoda uses a Force push on Palpatine to make it seem a little less hokey.
-As in L8wrtr’s edit, the medical droid no longer expresses that Padme is “perfectly healthy” or is confused over why she is dying.
-The Vader scene fades to black after he replies “Yes, Master” like in l8wrtr’s edit

I will be holding off on download requests until I upload the next version.