Just got done watching this and it’s hands down my favorite edit of TFA yet. Only minor changes I would personally make are:

When Han says “move, ball” to BB8 it doesn’t actually sound like his voice so maybe that could be addressed
I always liked the part where Han threw the guy into the Rathtar’s mouth after he punched him so would love to see that one bit restored
Agree with EddieDean that the “I’ll tighten your restraints” line should be put back in
The color correction throughout the entire film looked great except for Jakku which looked a little too blown out in terms of the white. I like the fact that you tried to differentiate the color of that planet so it didn’t look exactly like Tatooine, but it almost looked as white as the salt planet it TLJ so maybe there’s a happy medium somewhere.

For me this ranks right up at the very top of SW fanedits with Adywan’s and Hal9000’s releases. Brilliant job and I can’t wait to see the next version if any of the suggested changes are implemented.