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Post #1455993

Author
Burbin
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
2-Nov-2021, 2:21 PM

To avoid mentioning Anakin twice in a row, perhaps the first pargraph could be changed to:

  • With Nute Gunray freed from custody by the assassin Asajj Ventress, the Republic is no closer to capturing General Grievous.

This also avoids the implication Anakin is alone in trying to capture Grievous.