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Post #1455986

Author
vranir
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [up to s01e05 upgraded to v2.0]
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Date created
2-Nov-2021, 1:11 PM

I like your current text. Leave “but” out of it.

The only thing that feels off to me is “heroic” Captain Rex. Yes, it’s accurate but it seems unnecessary and highlights nothing in the context.