it’s phrased weird. it uses uncommon words/terms and odd sentence structure, featuring callbacks and parallel descriptors. It’s like statements nested within statements, in reverse. I’m sensitive to it because of my learning disability. it takes me 3 times as long as most people to read this type of prose, whereas more standard types, I can read twice as fast as the average person.
Post #1454663
- Author
- triadne
- Parent topic
- a new hope, adding visual effects, emotion and more character (a WIP)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1454663/action/topic#1454663
- Date created
- 26-Oct-2021, 12:15 AM