The explosion element looks interesting however one of the explosions isnt centered on the planet itself.
Also the explosion feels too plastered and in-static, try adding more dynamic stuff
Hal 9000 said:
The explosion of the planet seems to shift to the right mysteriously. Like part of it exploded to the right and then that part becomes the focus. I don’t know if that makes sense.
I think I favor Dat_SW_Guy’s version at the moment. This version of the explosion reads as Alderaan dissolving into an explosion already in progress while Dat’s looks more like the object itself is beginning to explode (albeit very quickly, as in the original film).
Alright, I will re-start this clip tonight.
Thanks for being honest guys.