Very good episode. I still did go through it again myself though and made a series of tiny trims totaling about 2 minutes. All are pretty nitpicky. Specifics are below, and the file I created is available at the link I previously sent you via PM. As always, feel free to incorporate or mimic anything you like.

Trimmed the traitor’s early line about coming across as defensive
Trimmed out awkward pauses in Satine’s rooftop greeting to ObiWan
Trimmed rooftop mention of Death Watch being on Concordia, as this gets implied/mentioned three separate times, which is a lot for something mysterious
Trimmed “weak” from “weak, peace-loving government” in the talk w Dooku
Trimmed the governor’s random reminder of the idea that Satine is trying to ally with the Separatists. I get that he’s trying to undermine her and say he knows why ObiWan is there, but it feels random and irrelevant.
Trimmed ObiWan repeating to the governor that the man who bombed the shrine was a member of Death Watch.
Trimmed ObiWan’s semi-correction that he’s hoping to confirm that the mines aren’t operational.
Trimmed the warrior’s line about not respecting Satine and jumped straight to him shooting the lightsaber out of ObiWan’s hand.
Trimmed ObiWan’s line about Satine having not changed when she says “but you weren’t [killed back there].”
Trimmed Satine’s line on the platform about having hoped that ObiWan of all people would have understood her position. Instead, she offers a more direct rebuke of what he’s saying.
Trimmed the first elevator interchange about ObiWan having known Satine previously.
Adjusted the timing and volume of the loud door closing sound after ObiWan and Anakin enter the audience chamber.
Trimmed the line about it being weird that Artoo is scanning a lot (at least I think that’s what was said). Now the trooper reports Artoo acting strange and two men missing.
Trimmed another awkward moment where Anakin asks about ObiWan and Satine in the middle of trying to help. I understand the teasing but it seems a very unhelpful time for it.
Tightened up dialogue around the standoff with the advisor to make it a little less corny.
Trimmed Anakin’s final “What was that about?” because he knows and we all know he knows. He still has the line about Satine being a special lady.