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Post #1449383

Author
EddieDean
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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Date created
18-Sep-2021, 1:55 PM

I know this isn’t an episode anyone’s excited about (indeed it’s probably my least favourite in the whole of my show), but I realised that my Malevolence episode really needed rebuilding from scratch, so I’ve spent the last nine hours doing that. It’s nearly done - all I need to do is play around with Grievous’ arrival at the medical station, and then rework the final battle a little.

It’s been painful but there’re LOADS of improvements. Less jumping around (via scenes recombined from the original), moments given far longer to sink in, extended scenes, and where I’ve intercut things, I’ve managed to keep all the scenes on the same theme together, so it’s way less taxing. This should flow a lot better than before. I’ve been less ‘clever’ with some of my reorderings than my original version - I had reordered some things for drama, but ultimately that small benefit wasn’t worth making the episode so choppy.

Hopefully this’ll be done soon, so I can move on…