I thought you would use a whip sound effect for the dissaperation like this. https://youtu.be/qwvUvx9W8mA.
I was sorta expecting this at the part in chapter 1 when Fry says “A lound echoing crack broke the sleepy silence like a gunshot”. But other than that it’s great
I could’ve used a sound like that, but I ended up using the apparation sound from the films.