I wouldn’t say it’s perfect but it’s very good. I’m happy to include it once both you and sherlock are happy with it. It’s really a nice change, tying into Rey’s journey through the trilogy. I wonder if they gave her the original line in order to make it at least a little bit different from Luke’s confrontation with the Emperor in ROTJ. At this point in the trilogy, though, I’ll take a retread versus making that film feel anemic in retrospect because it didn’t get into apparently larger issues of ALL the Jedi and Sith needing to spiritually battle it out.