Guys, this analytical feedback is impeccable and very much appreciated.

This episode will always end up a little janky just because of the source material available, but there are some excellent suggestions here.

Burbin, good shout on the redundancy of certain lines in the crawl. I could take back a little more flexibility there.

And that’s interesting on the audio. I did a lot of new audio work to keep it smooth, so it’s understandable that a few elements need tweaking further. I’ll fix a few noted places, but if it’s fully widespread I have an idea of why that might be, and know the fix.