I watched your v2.0 of The New Padawan:
I liked the reworked episode very much with the exception:

After “the seperatist army is retreating…” we see the seperatist army is moving forward, seeing incoming reinforcements and just like that the battle is over in a glimpse of a moment. I find that very aprupt, is there any battle footage you can include there again?
technical wise the voices seem to be quieter than before? Is the center channel a seperate one? If so raise it
the transition between the music at the end of the episode and the credit music sounds off. They don´t fit together to make a smooth transition. Perhaps try a harder cut?

As far as the suggestions from “vranir” go:

i share the first two
about the 3rd and 5th i´m not so sure
Personally i like the little nick nag between ventress and obi-wan, we get the sense they´ve met before