Since we’re still waiting on the last VFX shots anyway, I’ll probably try to smooth out that fade into “end” a bit more. But now I know to focus my efforts on Version B. Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I’m glad to know it’s so close!
If you’re still working on it, my thought on it is that the sound is a bit muffled compared to the rest of the line. I only say this because it may be a bit unclear to a first-time viewer.