Try making the Pasaana festival more of a thing that happens every generation rather than 42 years or biannually, to tie into the “generations” thing of the saga or the sequels. I also think referencing the other seven movies (you’ve already referenced TLJ in it) in it would reinforce that.
Post #1446077
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- TestingOutTheTest
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- The Rise of Skywalker Expanded Edition by Rae Carson: The "Tragedy of Vader" Edit (v2 NOW AVAILABLE)
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- 27-Aug-2021, 5:05 PM