01x00 was always my least favorite of your episodes, but I must say that it is vastly improved.

If there was one Chang I’d still suggest, it would be cutting the Grievous and Dooku introduction, since it’s very similar to what we already saw with Ventress and doesn’t actually explain Grievous. Let him simply appear in the battle, directing the droids and fighting Jedi. That tells you all you really need to know at this point.

Bottom Line = well done. I can’t wait for the other revisions!